Thirds

the placement of the buildings show thirds. theres space in the back and you can cut it into three

Masters of photography

Gary Winogrand

Ansel Adams

Josef Koudelka

Negative Critique

1. The problem with my negatives is that they have a good amount of water spots :[
The cause of this is basically loose water that stays on to the photos witch is transfers from the negative roller.

2. I don't really have my negative strip with me so i can't determine the numbers by memory :[
but from what i can remember is that some of the pictures i really like were the ones i took down town and probably a couple from the human knot.

Filling the frame

This image is filled up. There is no empty space what so ever. The girl on the far right's head is even a little cut off.

Action & Emotion

This girl is in action by attempting to hit the volleyball and the expression on her face shows that she almost has it.

The Story

This picture's story shows kids in a class room and only one person in the whole intire class is doing her work. The rest of the kids are just socializing.

Pinhole photos

GOOD.
This picture has a slight blur on the flowers on the tree

The tree is in focus but the closer flowers from the tree are out of focus.

But other than that its a really good picture and its very colorful. I really like it :]

BAD.
The whole picture is out of focus.
Its very blury but you can still tell
that theres a building in the background.