Filling the frame

This image is filled up. There is no empty space what so ever. The girl on the far right's head is even a little cut off.

Action & Emotion

This girl is in action by attempting to hit the volleyball and the expression on her face shows that she almost has it.

The Story

This picture's story shows kids in a class room and only one person in the whole intire class is doing her work. The rest of the kids are just socializing.

Pinhole photos

GOOD.
This picture has a slight blur on the flowers on the tree

The tree is in focus but the closer flowers from the tree are out of focus.

But other than that its a really good picture and its very colorful. I really like it :]

BAD.
The whole picture is out of focus.
Its very blury but you can still tell
that theres a building in the background.